Simsa
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I think it would be better to move the excerpt with the hunter to chapter 4; I just forgot to mention it. And it's better to forget about it for now. Otherwise, too many storylines emerge at once. It's better to start and complete them gradually.
Yeah... I agree... And who will write about the dwarves? Machete mentioned it... Machete, will you write the dwarf storyline? It can be started in chapter 5. By chapters 6-7, we can bring everyone together... And then mix them up... Any thoughts, suggestions, objections, or alternative ideas?
Best regards, Simas...
P.S.: I have exams next week, so I might not be around and won't be in the mood for reviewing...