Simsa
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Thanks, Simas, for the corrections, even if it's late, but happy March 8th!
Albin dismounted and, passing through the sphere that dissolved upon his touch, walked towards the underground entrance.
Another one, having torn through several dwarves, rushed at the leader, but only a severed head, pierced by a bolt, flew to the dwarf's feet. Meanwhile, Albin, wiping the smoking demonic blood from his sword, began to reload his crossbow.
I thought about it and came to two conclusions:
1) Albin fired, and since one bolt couldn't have stopped the demon (it could still have been moving by inertia, for example), in the next moment his sword cut off the demon's head, and that's how it could have happened that the head was cut off and pierced by a bolt... In this case, it should be specified that Albin wasn't loading, but RELOADING his crossbow.
2) someone from the caravan shot the demon in the head, and Albin just helped, finishing the fight with his sword... and then he started loading his crossbow... Should something be changed or added here too?
Which of the options?... But the first one is easier, of course - just replace it with "reloading" and that's it
