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Thanks, Simas, for the corrections, even if it's late, but happy March 8th!
Albin dismounted and, after passing through the sphere, it dissolved.
??! I read and reread it, but I still couldn't understand the sentence…


I'll rephrase:
Albin dismounted and, after passing through the sphere, which dissolved upon his touch, he walked towards the underground entrance. That's better, right?

So, the opening could have looked like an arch, or was it definitely an arch?

The opening looked like an arch.

And also, about the dwarf
I rephrased:

One of them lunged at the huge dwarf, tearing off his left arm, was thrown back, and, crashing into the stone, exhaled.
Another, having torn apart several dwarves, rushed at the elder, but only a severed head with a bolt piercing it flew to the dwarf's feet. At this time, Albin, wiping the demonic blood from his sword, began to reload his crossbow.

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