What if we tried to create a movie script together!

Colleague, I read the excerpt, and frankly, it feels like you're taking a long time to get to the point. Furthermore, while reading the excerpt, the reader will inevitably conclude that in our world (read: Draconia), there is only one Grove where elves live. Not a forest, not a thicket, but a Grove. In Kyrgyzstan, we have a concept called a "forest belt," which is planted near a road. If you ever go to Issyk-Kul to swim and sunbathe (you may have heard of this lake), you will pass by such forest belts along the way. So, I want to say that the word "Grove" is mentioned too often. After all, a Grove is a relatively rare forest planting, something like our forest belt. I won't dwell on the errors that my colleague Simas has already found; I'll touch on the last point. "Two vampires appeared in the clearing..." But how did the elf know that the two who appeared were vampires? Fangs in their mouths, gray skin, or something else? But please, don't use vampire swords from the game as an invariable attribute of vampires. Otherwise, we'll again fall back to the level of retelling the game. And then, what about the guards, those camouflaged archers who are supposed to shoot down everything that moves? If an ordinary elf has spotted vampires, then it is their duty to shoot down these vampires before they even approach.