Drnik
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Kosh, the "THE BEST" race!!! I just didn't really like the motto, but everything else is good... I had some ideas about such a race... but I was too late))) I would have made it more focused on Yagiped... although you could also make it a separate one...
Criticism:
1) The names of the creatures... something is wrong with them... they don't seem to be connected to each other... I don't know... they generally need to be reworked...
2) As I already said, the motto... it... it made me smile)))
P.S.: Maybe replace it with "Let's bring sand and sun to the masses"? xD
If anything, write to me in a private message or on ICQ....
Criticism:
1) The names of the creatures... something is wrong with them... they don't seem to be connected to each other... I don't know... they generally need to be reworked...
2) As I already said, the motto... it... it made me smile)))
P.S.: Maybe replace it with "Let's bring sand and sun to the masses"? xD
If anything, write to me in a private message or on ICQ....
