Майор Вихрь
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I respect creativity and praise the author for not creating unnecessary topics and posting in this one. But the race didn't appeal to me personally. Let's leave the medieval fantasy of the heroes alone and not mix in the Renaissance and a couple of centuries after it. As for the balance, I won't say anything, because it's non-existent in this race. The hero is too unique; even a Barbarian would be jealous. Although, for the attempt to create something unique, a plus 
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O God of Earth and Altar,
Bow down and hear our cry,
Our earthly rulers falter,
Our people drift and die,
The walls of gold entomb us,
The swords of scorn divide,
Take not thy thunder from us,
Take away our pride.
G.K. Chesterton: English Hymnal
Bow down and hear our cry,
Our earthly rulers falter,
Our people drift and die,
The walls of gold entomb us,
The swords of scorn divide,
Take not thy thunder from us,
Take away our pride.
G.K. Chesterton: English Hymnal