Zeratul
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Dracon Mallasa, the text is good. But please, don't over-dramatize the events, and don't emphasize the elven hierarchy so harshly. Also, although there are some inconsistencies, I won't focus on them for now, but I'd like to say that you rushed things by bringing the elves together. The meeting will happen, of course, but later. It's very strange that Trent, like all the Dark Elves, who are known for their distrust and suspicion, suddenly gives a valuable artifact to just any graduate of the assassin school. There needs to be some form of selection process, conducted personally by Trent, and the scene with the hydra fight, frankly, is not very significant. Of course, the main assessment will be done by Cymaus, and I'm just making notes.
