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Registered: 11/10/2007

Posts: 57

#97 1/29/2008 11:57 AM UTC

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I've read the new text. I only stumbled on this phrase:

added a resonant bass to his thought, like a dwarf

I reread it several times... I can't fully imagine this phrase... either something is wrong with it... or with my imagination...

Maybe:

added his thought with a resonant, dwarfish bass

is better, more correct?

Otherwise, I didn't find any mistakes. Sincerely, Simas.