It just doesn't seem like the soul of this demon is contained in a disassembled artifact – it's practically everywhere, in many games and books, right? In my opinion, it's better to say that its soul was imprisoned in the astral plane, where, as in my introduction, there is nothing, not even time.
P.S. Drakodar is better, IMHO (gift of the dragon - the great creator of the world), or at least Rokhtan, but Drakodar is better.
By the way, about the name of the world. Drakodar sounds good, but we haven't developed the metaphysics of the world yet. The fact is that, despite all its variations in different works, all authors tacitly assume that dragons are creations of Chaos, but not of Order. I suggest thinking about the name of the world again (I'm not insisting on my version).
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Here I present the introduction and the beginning of the first chapter; I'll say right away that I deliberately made the introduction a little vague, as it will be mentioned again in the book. If you like it, I will continue writing. I know that the text is still rough, but it's a good start. I will edit it when I finish the chapter, if you like it.Prologue
And there was darkness. And time stood still. There was neither good nor evil, only what it should be restored from. In this cradle of life, as the darkness began to thicken, a spark ignited. Darkness was defeated…
…The spark, like the last star before dawn, losing but fighting to the end. It burned with its gentle, pale flame. Dormant, it still has to play its role. Later, much later than its birth…
…Much time has passed, but how can one say, since time is stopped? But the warmth, the light from this spark, created what should change everything…
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