Майор Вихрь
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Doesn't it bother you that some of these creatures are already used by other races from neighboring themes? The idea might be good, but who will be the core of the race, i.e., who is in power? For example, in Haven, it's humans, and in Stronghold, it's orcs. IMHO, the race needs to be reworked somewhat in this regard, with the creatures replaced, and then we can talk about balancing abilities, balancing upgrades, etc. It would also be good to come up with a story: who they are, where they came from, etc. I suggest taking an example from the creators of the races like Nighon, Swamp, and Thicket; they have everything well thought out. In general, good luck, and go for it!
O God of Earth and Altar,
Bow down and hear our cry,
Our earthly rulers falter,
Our people drift and die,
The walls of gold entomb us,
The swords of scorn divide,
Take not thy thunder from us,
Take away our pride.
G.K. Chesterton: English Hymnal
Bow down and hear our cry,
Our earthly rulers falter,
Our people drift and die,
The walls of gold entomb us,
The swords of scorn divide,
Take not thy thunder from us,
Take away our pride.
G.K. Chesterton: English Hymnal