4) There are really a lot of typos; it's better to check the texts in Word before release. It doesn't make sense to write about all of them, so I decided to fix them myself (Attachment 76928).
I didn't change the meaning of the texts anywhere; only fixed typos, missing spaces, commas, etc.
Thank you for the feedback!
I will take everything described above into account if I create a sequel or some other scenario.
Special thanks for the version with the corrected text. A little later, I will fix the mistake with the mage assignment and a couple of other issues.