This is too drawn out. It's simpler to say: a group of shady characters met him, told him "come with us," and dragged him to the obelisk. And while he was reeling from what was happening, it was all over...
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This is too drawn out. It's simpler to say: a group of shady characters met him, told him "come with us," and dragged him to the obelisk. And while he was reeling from what was happening, it was all over...