The pros:
1. The plot is simple but still interesting.
2. The mod for dwellings of levels 4-7 is a good idea; it would be great if this mod and other mapmakers used it more often.
The cons (perhaps many players won't care, so these aren't really cons):
1. The player colors don't match the races (Necromancers should have turquoise, Dark Elves should have purple, etc.).
2. The water isn't configured so that the repainted ground underneath isn't visible.
3. For some reason, the Angel Altar in mission 3 glitched out; the icon showing which player owns it spins, but the building itself isn't there. This is probably related to the fact that in mission 4, the Observatory with the Angel Altar model is located where Fiona's tomb should be.
4. Tasks like "bring 100 crystals to the vampires" should be displayed as secondary tasks, as other players have already mentioned.