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1 - 8. Oh, shit, I'm sorry. 2 - 6. Is that really a men's yukata? 3 - 6. How are you doing? 5 - 7. I think I'll go get the color palette and concept for the screenshot. 6. The cells on the shield aren't drawn evenly; the slope of the grass in the wind isn't detailed; the ribbons and cloths don't sway uniformly, even though the tree should be sheltering the knight's back from the wind; the pommel of the sword is crooked; the scar across the eyebrow and cheekbone doesn't line up; it's unclear what the knight is looking at so thoughtfully if he's in a gorge and there's a cliff five meters away; he's on a quest – why aren't his belongings drawn?; judging by the cloak, he's been traveling for a long time – why is his beard so short and neat? Why does it look completely gray, but his hair doesn't? Why doesn't his hair look very dirty?; how does he take off and put on his armor without help? And if he has a squire, why didn't he mend his cloak?; why are there almost no signs of damage on the sword and shield – is he not even fighting? 0/10. (7) 7 - 6. PRO100 4EJIuK 8 - 8. When I got a failing grade on the history of the royal dynasty.
My sword, my trusted ally, unphased by my aspect.