I actually didn't manage to do it on the second try either. I cleared it in almost a minute and a half, which still left me with a minute and a half to deal with the Fatui.
The team composition remained the same – the one listed in my profile.
On the other hand, I don't kill the Fatui in the second part that quickly either. I think you need to pay close attention to the colors, and then you can take them down with Klee.
I realized that I'm playing Genshin for the process itself. Of course, I've always written in all the surveys that I like collecting things, exploring the world, etc., and the storyline here is just so-so.
But yesterday, I started playing through the Inazuma storyline ONLY to unlock the reputation quests there.
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I have 4 characters fighting for 3 decent spears, so the old man has to run around with the Blackcliff Pole.
At least a new 5-star spear will appear on her banner.
Added 23 hours 17 minutes ago
Wish, regarding saving up for Raiden.
You might already know, but I only found out today. If you place certain furniture sets in the Serenitea Pot, the companions will have special dialogues that give you Primogems.
Each character has 2 dialogues (20 Primogems each = 40 Primogems per character).
Considering the number of characters you have, that should be enough for about 7 pulls.

В тихой однообразной жизни всегда так бывает: каждый отдельный день бесконечно долог, но месяцы и годы мчатся с непостижимой быстротой.
I wanted to offer you some flowers, but a crown would suit a princess like you much better
Смысл жизни в том, что жизнь на тебе не заканчивается