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-- I removed the part about surprise; it creates unnecessary tension from the very start. First point. I changed the wording. There's no need to specify that we are already looking for the culprits. It makes it look as though we're agreeing to this just like that, without any counter-demands. The second point works. In the third point, I slightly changed the order and the wording. I also added a note about our readiness for dynastic marriages — we have many unmarried knights. I completely struck out the passages about depriving them of what they have and about betrayal; it sounds like a threat. And he already knows we won't forgive anything. My lords, your thoughts? - Axel addressed the other knights.

- I would descend upon Libertu with an army and demonstrate to that conceited upstart and all the other lords where such treacherous thoughts lead. - This idea belonged to the Knight of the Clear Skies.


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