A very well-made map. A couple of comments:
- a stone across the road - is it a roadblock?)
- if you destroy the demon garrison (free the path for the orcs) and go through the orc territory to the northern garrison, you will get the message "you disobeyed the queen's order".
- grammar
- the pyramid was guarded by 2 peasants, but that was probably my mistake.
- regarding Antica, I was playing with Laslo, and no script errors were noticed, except that the order to stay behind the garrisons was given to the border guard, Gretham, and not to Laslo; so why couldn't he leave?)

+ I would like more complex, multi-stage quests.

An interesting scenario, it's enjoyable to play.