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“Oh dear, oh dear,” Achelsius shook his head, finishing his review of the book. “There really are all sorts of people.”
After that, he and his assistants return to the shop.
“As promised, here you go. You certainly have an interesting writing style; it’s truly captivating! It’s clear you’re a talented writer. However, regarding the informative aspect… it would be good to make a few adjustments. To ensure the moral message is clear to readers. For example, one sister achieved great heights through hard work and honest labor, while the other, on the contrary, tried to live a sweet life through vice, debauchery, and other sins, and paid the price for it. And perhaps fewer details of a scandalous nature, as it’s a bit much, and what if it falls into the hands of children? As for the miraculous recipe, it would be good to remove it from the book, or at least rename it, so that the name of the sinful and fugitive criminal is not mentioned in the world, and even in a positive sense.”
After that, he and his assistants return to the shop.
“As promised, here you go. You certainly have an interesting writing style; it’s truly captivating! It’s clear you’re a talented writer. However, regarding the informative aspect… it would be good to make a few adjustments. To ensure the moral message is clear to readers. For example, one sister achieved great heights through hard work and honest labor, while the other, on the contrary, tried to live a sweet life through vice, debauchery, and other sins, and paid the price for it. And perhaps fewer details of a scandalous nature, as it’s a bit much, and what if it falls into the hands of children? As for the miraculous recipe, it would be good to remove it from the book, or at least rename it, so that the name of the sinful and fugitive criminal is not mentioned in the world, and even in a positive sense.”
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