Phew, I finished it. So, here's what I want to note:
-as mentioned earlier, the passage takes a very long time to complete. 25 days!
-Ingvar already has a whole legion (1124) of Mountain Guards after 3 months at the beginning. It's unclear where he got them from.
-Dwarf dwellings. The idea of getting resources for destroying them is good, but there are two problems: 1. The dwellings on the surface are "destroyed" normally, but underground, the explosion shifts somewhere else.
2. At first, the resources from them are useful, helping to finish building the castles, but then they are practically useless. Maybe make it so that you can find some kind of artifact there?
-Hangwul... I already wrote above that I didn't like it.
-Freezing after capturing the second garrison. I was already going to write about it, but then I saw that I needed to set the AI speed to maximum - it helped.
There were problems with the final dwarf, but with the help of the Dark faction, I was able to defeat him.
If I summarize everything, I liked the map for its ideas and videos. Especially the fourth one, where three Knights destroy half of the dwarf camp :D. There is also a small flaw there, when at the very beginning the Knights pass through the snow, but I think that's a minor thing.