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to Lu41k: Here's some criticism :D: The beginning seems a bit too dull, but by the middle, it picks up, and there's a sense of hope, and then suddenly it's gone again! Why do you do that? But personally, the ending really touched my soul, as you would say; without it, it wouldn't make sense – it reflects your mood at that time, which is great! Now it's my turn :): "Ignore everything and take care of your health!" I sometimes hear behind my back From those whose veins contain Fish blood Mixed with stagnant water "Ignore everything..." And that means, if People die in a stormy night, You just wave your hand and Drink tea in your chair Yes, be silent like a mouse. If, in a gloomy stairwell, A knife is held to a friend's heart, You, like a coward, Fearing the bandits' revenge, Run away, Just don't touch me. You will hardly be able to justify That false principle, Such traitors betrayed their homeland – They raised their hands high from afar. And when the people, for freedom, Bleed at the fiery line, These Precious health They preserved in undergrounds, Like moles. And now, their young descendant Teaches us, holding himself like an eagle. "Ignore everything..." Oh, how I want to spit At this Contented cat!
"Единственное, что можно сказать с уверенностью об удаче - она изменит..."