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Thank you! :smile43:
Reply: It doesn't really relate to my life... It's just my reaction to what's happening. Maybe that's why it seems like it's from my personal life. Not at all. By the way, you're not the first one to think that.
Well, here's another one of my creations, which is also a song. It was written on October 30, 2003... I perfectly understand that I'm far from being a poet; the rhyme is lame, sometimes it's just missing, and in general... But at least there's a piece of my soul in it, a little sadness, love, despair... and...
Pain
A yellow leaf, as it flies away, falls on the wet ground.
The black sky, not hiding its tears, knocks on the window.
And in your eyes - it's night; nothing will warm them anymore,
And in your soul - there's emptiness. Only the heart is full of tears!
And despair bursts out, breaking through with tears.
Pressing your fists to your eyes, you can't hold it back.
Only a mad heart beats and tears itself apart,
And from this pain, you can't escape anywhere.
You returned from the war. You faced trouble head-on,
You outsmarted the bullet and the mine, returning home alive.
You fell in love with Her, and full of hope,
You plunged into love, passionately and with all your soul.
But you didn't know that love would be called trouble.
That dreams would collapse, leaving only pain in your soul.
And love will turn into a murderer, taking your heart with it,
Leaving nothing in return, causing only bitter pain.
And you look out the window, seeing nothing ahead.
And in your eyes, a sea of tears spreads from the bitterness.
You still live, hating this life with all your soul,
You look bitterly into the distance, and in the distance, there is only black night.
But everything in the world can't be so painful and bitter.
And someday, the pain will slowly leave your heart.
You will wake up one day, look out the same window.
And through the clouds, the sun will rise again to meet you.
And with its rays, the sun will warm you again,
Filling the emptiness in your soul with warmth and love.
And your cooled heart, it will warm it again.
You will love again, come alive, and believe in a dream!
I didn't change anything... Yes, if I worked on it, it would turn out more beautiful, but the soul would be gone... And that's more important to me...
I don't know why I'm posting it; I'll probably regret it in the morning, but I'll still take the risk. Maybe someone will see something in this song that is personally meaningful to them... Then it won't be in vain... :smile43:
Thank you! :smile43:
Reply: It doesn't really relate to my life... It's just my reaction to what's happening. Maybe that's why it seems like it's from my personal life. Not at all. By the way, you're not the first one to think that.
Well, here's another one of my creations, which is also a song. It was written on October 30, 2003... I perfectly understand that I'm far from being a poet; the rhyme is lame, sometimes it's just missing, and in general... But at least there's a piece of my soul in it, a little sadness, love, despair... and...
Pain
A yellow leaf, as it flies away, falls on the wet ground.
The black sky, not hiding its tears, knocks on the window.
And in your eyes - it's night; nothing will warm them anymore,
And in your soul - there's emptiness. Only the heart is full of tears!
And despair bursts out, breaking through with tears.
Pressing your fists to your eyes, you can't hold it back.
Only a mad heart beats and tears itself apart,
And from this pain, you can't escape anywhere.
You returned from the war. You faced trouble head-on,
You outsmarted the bullet and the mine, returning home alive.
You fell in love with Her, and full of hope,
You plunged into love, passionately and with all your soul.
But you didn't know that love would be called trouble.
That dreams would collapse, leaving only pain in your soul.
And love will turn into a murderer, taking your heart with it,
Leaving nothing in return, causing only bitter pain.
And you look out the window, seeing nothing ahead.
And in your eyes, a sea of tears spreads from the bitterness.
You still live, hating this life with all your soul,
You look bitterly into the distance, and in the distance, there is only black night.
But everything in the world can't be so painful and bitter.
And someday, the pain will slowly leave your heart.
You will wake up one day, look out the same window.
And through the clouds, the sun will rise again to meet you.
And with its rays, the sun will warm you again,
Filling the emptiness in your soul with warmth and love.
And your cooled heart, it will warm it again.
You will love again, come alive, and believe in a dream!
I didn't change anything... Yes, if I worked on it, it would turn out more beautiful, but the soul would be gone... And that's more important to me...
I don't know why I'm posting it; I'll probably regret it in the morning, but I'll still take the risk. Maybe someone will see something in this song that is personally meaningful to them... Then it won't be in vain... :smile43:
"Как это странно всегда..
Вроде бы взрослые люди,
А в голове ерунда..
Мечтаем как дети о чуде.."