Billdomaster, please advise on what can be improved.

A young maid stood on her knees, trying to see something through the keyhole. But unfortunately for her, the curtains were tightly drawn, and it was quite dark in the room. She could only hear women's moans. But that was enough for her to gossip with her friends again about the owner.
- Milona," someone said sternly behind her.
The girl jumped up, turned around, and looked at the senior maid with guilty eyes. The latter grabbed her hand and pulled her away from the door of the mistress's bedroom.
- And who raised you?
- I'm sorry, ma'am, I…
- You stick your long nose where it doesn't belong. If you keep doing this, you won't last long here.
- It's just...I feel bad for Mrs. Grasfold. Such a good woman. And her husband...an old fool…
- Milona!
- Sorry.
- Go work!
- Yes, ma'am, okay, ma'am.
- That's enough," said a man in his fifties, covering his ears.
The girl lying next to him in bed stopped groaning and stared blankly ahead.
- Maybe we should talk?" asked the man, but received only silence in response. "Okay. As usual. Nothing changes. You are still the same silent, gloomy girl. Only now everything is much worse. Probably, you don't even have a boyfriend anymore. Did you ever have one? Perhaps you spend all day training and cleaning your rifle.
He got out of bed, walked to the window, opened the curtains, sat down in an armchair, and unfolded the morning newspaper.
- Here, there's already news about your latest client. Well, what was that old idiot thinking? He had ten years left to live, and he refused such sums. He could be lying on a beach somewhere right now, basking in the sun. I almost feel sorry for him. Although, he did live a good life. Not everyone gets to do that. And you, don't you want to live? Or will you just turn into stone? I know you have feelings. You can't fool me, and you can't fool yourself. You're still the same little orphan girl. Only now you don't cry over your parents anymore. Somewhere deep inside, you still have feelings. Why did you bury them so deeply? Are you afraid it will hurt as much as it did back then? Yes, it's obvious that this is exactly what you're afraid of. Are you staying silent? Fine, stay silent.
- Why are we doing this?" suddenly said the girl.
- Doing what?
- Pretending to be lovers.
- It's for security...
- Nonsense.
- People who know suggested that it would be safer for both of us. The rest doesn't matter," sighed the girl. "You can lie down for another half hour and then leave.
Miretta – that's the name of this silent statue. How she became who she is now is already history and has no meaning. Currently, Miretta works as a contract killer. However, orders come in quite rarely. Therefore, the desire to kill, the girl satisfies by hunting wild animals. Killings with a rifle are the only thing that touches Miretta's soul, or rather, helps her not to go crazy and completely turn into nothing. Everything else, fortunately or unfortunately, she has successfully suppressed. Or something still remains? Nevertheless, she continues her modest life, or maybe just existence?
Characteristics:
Strength – 30
Intelligence – 40
Willpower – 40
Agility – 40
Perception – 40
Wisdom – 5
Charisma – 5
Dreyeria
Access to Dreyerian skills. +50 attribute points, +3 OW, +1 OH.
Prosperity: +100% to the reward amount for completing a quest, twice reduced cost of learning Imperial School of Magic, Scholar, Medic, Rogue, Merchant, Cook, Craftsman, Musician, and Enhancer.
Access to skills: Specialist, Expert, Professional, Master, Killer
Asceticism: +3 OW, +1 OH, +20 HP, +3 to movement speed, refusal of rewards and inability to use money except to satisfy basic character needs.
Agility. The character can shoot or cast spells and move simultaneously.
Rifle
+1 to accuracy for each unit of perception.
- Precision Shooting
+1% to critical hit chance for each unit of intelligence - Special Technique - Professional
Reload speed -1
Accuracy penalty from headshot is not 50%, but 30%.
Bonus to critical hit chance from precision shooting is not 1%, but 2%.
Shot in the leg deals normal damage.
Penalty to dodge and movement speed in prone position is not -80%, but -50%.
Pistol
+1 to dodge for each unit of perception
+3 to movement speed
Scout
+2 to stealth for each unit of agility
+2 to speed
- Silent Kill
Stealthy attack on opponents who fail a perception check kills them (only melee bladed weapons). Stealthy ranged attacks deal five times the damage. - Ultimate Skill - Special Training
+1 to accuracy for each unit of perception and +1 to dodge for each unit of agility when using any type of weapon. - Special Technique - Killer
In case of successful stealth, aggressive actions against other characters do not remove the scout's stealth effect. Silent kill at range kills instantly.
Inventory: rifle of the latest model from a well-known company; pistol of the latest model from a well-known company; gun cleaning tools; ammunition for the rifle and pistol; comfortable and practical clothing.