to be honest, I don't like either of the two options. In my opinion, we should all just discuss a general scenario for the final map together, and let one person make it, BUT... before doing that, everyone needs to finish their introductory maps. As for mine, I'll say that I will have it completely finished by the end of next week.
SandroXXL just played through your scenario.
Brief summary:
The quests and scripts, as well as the texts, are top-notch!
A few glitches need to be fixed (specifically, mark that only the "light blue player" can be a human, while the "Blue" one cannot be a bandit).
It's a good start. The difficulty is moderate. Overall rating of the work done - high