1. It looks kind of absurd that the main hero is a corpse in the sea (you can pick up his grave) and simultaneously in prison
2. Did you actually take Water... fortress (can't remember the name), where there are 17 champions?! while having 300 pirates?
Otherwise everything is good, you write events excellently
Regarding the notes:
1. I haven't found a rational solution yet to move the hero using events without portals....So I had to move the hero via trigger. True, the first one has to be killed...That's the reason for the grave...It's like a "planned bug":)
2. You need to take this Fortress immediately after disembarking from the ship...
