Yes, of course – concise and to the point! As I see it, this would be suitable for his appearance in NHF_E, but beyond that, there are no limits to perfection!
By the way, I once stumbled upon literary descriptions of all the main characters somewhere on the internet. If I remember correctly, it mentioned that when Wilma married Eric, he was a widower and already had a son, and she also seemed to have a son of her own, but I don't remember if she was a widow at that time... unfortunately, I didn't save the link to that site, and I can't find it right now... probably that resource is gone.
Блистает там воздушностью прогалин.
Но между кедров, полных тишиной,
Расщелина по склону ниспадала.
О, никогда под бледною луной
Так пышен не был тот уют лесной...