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The stories are wonderful; the fifth one is a masterpiece. A worthy blend of poignant thoughts, unusual plot twists, refined classics, and good literary descriptions. Stylish and, most importantly, a cohesive and complete story.
By the way, I also had a pleasant impression of the sixth one.
As for the second... despite Revan's and Sezam's delight, I will still speak my mind.
You know, there are people who love dark jokes like "- Mom, Dad hanged himself in the bathroom. - But there is no one here. - I was joking, he's hanging in the kitchen." I, however, find such jokes disgusting. That is why this story did not evoke delight in me. It is evident that the story was written with soul; many moments are well-observed and described. And I was horrified to see the author's soul poured out before me. :( A bitter one... who could come up with such a thing? I am not talking about a happy ending, but at least some thread of hope, eh?
And secondly. You can cover a naked body with banknotes and say: "Now it is decent and proper." No, it is still just as indecent and improper. Similarly, the author covered this story and all its insults with a disclaimer. Like "this is all fiction, and not about you at all, and whoever takes it personally is a fool." Nevertheless, it is clear to anyone who the author was thinking of when composing all these lines.
Some people like dark humor, some might be glad that they weren't hit as hard, some (like Heroist) will laugh at overtly fictional lines. I feel as if I have been rummaging through trash. Or as if I watched television—the same grimness.
One needs to be kinder.
p.s. I know that almost everyone's thoughts on this do not coincide with mine, but I've had enough.
By the way, I also had a pleasant impression of the sixth one.
As for the second... despite Revan's and Sezam's delight, I will still speak my mind.
You know, there are people who love dark jokes like "- Mom, Dad hanged himself in the bathroom. - But there is no one here. - I was joking, he's hanging in the kitchen." I, however, find such jokes disgusting. That is why this story did not evoke delight in me. It is evident that the story was written with soul; many moments are well-observed and described. And I was horrified to see the author's soul poured out before me. :( A bitter one... who could come up with such a thing? I am not talking about a happy ending, but at least some thread of hope, eh?
And secondly. You can cover a naked body with banknotes and say: "Now it is decent and proper." No, it is still just as indecent and improper. Similarly, the author covered this story and all its insults with a disclaimer. Like "this is all fiction, and not about you at all, and whoever takes it personally is a fool." Nevertheless, it is clear to anyone who the author was thinking of when composing all these lines.
Some people like dark humor, some might be glad that they weren't hit as hard, some (like Heroist) will laugh at overtly fictional lines. I feel as if I have been rummaging through trash. Or as if I watched television—the same grimness.
One needs to be kinder.
p.s. I know that almost everyone's thoughts on this do not coincide with mine, but I've had enough.
В тихой однообразной жизни всегда так бывает: каждый отдельный день бесконечно долог, но месяцы и годы мчатся с непостижимой быстротой.
I wanted to offer you some flowers, but a crown would suit a princess like you much better
Смысл жизни в том, что жизнь на тебе не заканчивается
Ple-Sen
