Rhyme — Everything about everything.

No ratings yet — be the first to rate!

Single choice Public votes

This poll is closed.

Rapper

10.3% 4 votes

Okay

35.9% 14 votes

So so

15.4% 6 votes

Well, maybe I can help with something

12.8% 5 votes

One, two, three, four, five. I’ve been friends with rhyme since childhood!

25.6% 10 votes

Dr gIVI

19 years ago

Many men wish death upon me,
Blood in my eyes, dawg, and I can't see.
I'm tryin' to be what I'm destined to be,
And niggaz tryin' to take my life away.
I put a hole in nigga for f*cking with me,
My back on the wall, now you gon' see.
Better watch how you talk, when you talk about me,
'Cause I'll come and take your life away.
Many men, many, many, many, many men
Wish death upon me.
Lord I don't cry no more,
Don't look to the sky no more.
Have mercy on me,
Have mercy on my soul.
Somewhere my heart turned cold.
Have mercy on many men,
Many, many, many, many men
Wish death upon me.

Dr gIVI

19 years ago

Auto-translated

Aha! Where are you all?
I'm looking for you!
Don't hide in the oats,
I'm still looking for you!

Аделаида

19 years ago

Auto-translated

Yes, Ivashka is a great guy,
He came up with a cool idea,
He's just a young man,
But when he grows up, he'll show everyone!

Dr gIVI

19 years ago

Auto-translated

Hooray! People are here! Finally. I was already starting to think I was forgotten, That would have been a complete disaster.

In reply to Sergh

R@zer

19 years ago

Auto-translated

I write poems. (If anyone wants, I can send them privately.) And for rhyme:
Hello friends
I write too
Yes, the topic is great,
but it's nonsense:)
They're bashing the factions
but how can we not give them a piece of our mind?
Well, I've said everything,
goodbye, see you later.
I'm gone, like an angel into the clouds.

Saruman

19 years ago

Auto-translated

Saruman would write more
If he knew how to rhyme like D'Artagnan

But in reality, I don't consider rap to be an art form, although some of its themes are quite good (especially when listening to it with vodka).

Смок

19 years ago

Auto-translated

I would write more,
If I only thought about it,
Just to speak in rhyme,
And, honestly, it's time to get started,
We need to talk more,
So we can understand each other better,
But if you're a rapper,
it doesn't mean,
That you know how to make rap,
You're just reading it now,
Without contempt or shame,
And you'll leave us with nothing but words
Now there are more of us
What will happen next, then?
Well, maybe this was,
A poorly written poem by me,
Don't judge me too harshly,
I just needed to say something...

Added 6 minutes ago

Saruman;66540

Saruman would write more
If he knew rhymes like D'Artagnan

Actually, I don't consider rap to be an art, although some of its themes are quite good (especially with vodka:))

Rap is definitely an art,
But not everyone can,
Live in the underground,
And create good rap,
D'Artagnan is long gone,
But there are other ways,
Read Mayakovsky,
Listen to Yu.G., be enlightened,
But don't forget the people,
They gave you life,
Respect, maybe money,
So come on,
Let's talk later,
I'm not very good at this,
Or rather,
I also need to learn how to rhyme,
And learn to do it well,
Well, goodbye, see you later...

Added 6 minutes ago

R@zer;66537

I write poems (if anyone wants, I'll send them privately.;)) And for a rhyme:
Hello friends
I write too
Yes, the topic is great,
but it's nonsense:)
They're bashing the Clans
well, how can we not give them a kick?
Well, I said everything,
good bye, bye.
I left like an angel in the clouds

Well, let's start a fight,
We'll hit them all in the kidneys,
We'll bash the Clans,
Maybe we'll light a fire *from the barrel :-D*
And I agree with the topic,
But still, don't forget,
And promise to come back,
We don't need angels here,
It's better to be a sacred warrior,
Well, I'm saying goodbye to you,
See you soon, don't forget....

In reply to Смок

R@zer

19 years ago

Auto-translated

I don't understand: why did I get a blog for a couple of lines, but Smoke didn't? Applause.

In reply to RedB

Смок

19 years ago

Auto-translated

RedB;43792

because in poetry, rhythm is also important, not just rhyming lines.

So, are you saying,
That rap is just a collection of words,
Let me tell you one thing,
you are very wrong,
Rap is a collection of lyrics,
with a good sample,
a lively rhythm,
so rap is poetry,
without unnecessary fluff,
well, okay,
goodbye,
maybe we'll meet again...

RedB

19 years ago

Auto-translated

I'm really happy for you that you're so into the topic of American rednecks – it's a worthy example to follow...

In reply to RedB

Смок

19 years ago

Auto-translated

RedB;66716

I'm really happy for you that you're so into American trash culture – it's a worthy example to follow...

Stop, Americans don't like me, I don't like American rap... No, of course, they're not bad, but I listen to Russian rap (well, almost, I have a couple of non-Russian songs)... Besides, I listen to it because I don't like other genres (well, not all of them), and because the lyrics are good, and also not everything that Americans do is theirs...

In reply to RedB

R@zer

19 years ago

Auto-translated

RedB;43792

yo, make some rap
bring all sorts of nonsense
I hate rappers
especially because of their pants
yo yo yo
****
I don't consider rap to be art. Read the classics, Blok, Brodsky... because in poetry, rhythm is also important, and not just rhyming lines.

What's wrong with my clothes?:mad:

GvozD

19 years ago

Auto-translated

Don't worry, it's just a simple poem.
Not all rap is poetry, and not all rap is awful.
It's about people who cry and laugh,
Fall in love and break up.
They have the same problems as everyone else,
And the form of the poem is just a trick.

Machete

19 years ago

Auto-translated

The topic was great,
that’s for sure,
but it ended too quickly,
which is unfortunate!

In all directions, bundles
of insults flew,
which was completely pointless
and sadly so.

I’m not writing this because
I’m a fan of the genre,
but because it was fun
and original.

And if anyone still hasn’t caught
my specific hint:
I’m a metalhead through and through,
but at least an intelligent one.;)

(Please treat my post as IMHO, I’m saying this so that such an interesting topic doesn’t get spoiled! I’ve personally wanted to chat in rhyme for a long time, but there’s usually nowhere to do it, and if you have something against Rap, that’s no reason to come only to say: I HATE IT, that’s uncivilized.)

RedB

19 years ago

Auto-translated

yo-yo-yo)) we don't mind that everything around is cool
everything will be great - let's say "om" (from Kirpichi)
I'm for peace in the world)) smile wider
I don't mind repeating about the briefs
underwear is visible from under them in all directions))
and in general, it's time to stop imitating the fashion of American poverty))
maybe girls will start paying attention)))