Posts from Rhyme

Here I am!
How are you doing?
I'm glad I stopped by,
No offense, and no ill will!:D

(Ugh, what nonsense):D

Let's paint the rhyme with colors,
In life, TALES flow again:)
In general, let's have FUN, guys,
We can't drift without RHYME!

Here I come to you again
And I don't see ANYTHING!:D

Yo, dude!
Let's rhyme!
What's wrong with you?
Looks like we're not meant to rhyme,
But a rhyme is needed, that's for sure.

There's a rhyme there, go and take a look. I just hid it. So that no profanity would be heard on the forum, here, And so that the cat wouldn't poop in my pants:D

Rhyme is always present in our lives,
we cannot hide it,
it sometimes helps us... :)
and if it's not there, there's no reason to cry... :)

P.S. I wrote this just for fun... :)

The idea is to write posts in verse here. To write in quatrains.

Conciseness is cool,
Brevity is also good,
But to say something important,
It just won't work.

I've always been against limitations,
For freedom, for flight.
Four lines are too few,
No one will develop the thought...

My Portal is glitching a bit,
something must be wrong...
It says in the database: "OVERLOADED!"
Maybe someone can tell me: "HOW?"

Yo, and here I am back,
Alright!
I woke up at 6 today,
This rap is awesome, dude, 2pac!

Ugh, it's nonsense, doesn't rhyme.
There's no build-up, not a bit.
If there were more lines,
The topic would be GOOD!

Go ahead and create it,
A lengthy poem for us.
I'm sure they'll praise you,
Tegnro, right away!:)

Yo, yeah, make some rap,
That's really cool.
But if you can't make rap,
Then it's not very cool.

OFFTOPIC
My apologies, I was a fool when it came to rap and I still am, but I remember something about rhyming...
Where is the rhyme in THIS verse??? Kill me, but I don't see it:

Yo, uh-huh, you're making rap,(rap)
It's very cool.(cool)
But if you don't know how to make rap,(rap, and if read as rap, it's all OK!)
Then it's very bad.(bad)

IMHO, "cool" and "bad" DO NOT RHYME AT ALL(they are even different in rhythm)...
Conclusion(MY PERSONAL ONE) — either Ivashka is a good rapper but a bad poet(well, that's normal), or I don't know a damn thing about rap(and he's still a bad poet:)). Actually, more likely the third option:):):):):)
Option three: he just messed up here(everything else is more or less readable and rhymable!!!) I ask someone in power to kill this post after reading

yo, make some rap
bring all sorts of nonsense
I hate rappers
especially because of their pants
yo yo yo
****
I don't consider rap to be art. Read the classics, Blok, Brodsky... after all, rhythm is also important in poetry, and not just rhyming lines.

Everyone expresses themselves as best they can, and there's no need to criticize. If someone makes a mistake, we should support them. Let the words flow freely, let's write without pretense. And there's no need to indiscriminately criticize Repakov. I'm not Brodsky or Blok, I'm inferior to them, But I believe that everyone will find their talent someday. P.S. No one is saying that rap is better than Brodsky, but I don't think Brodsky is considered a rapper. These are just very different styles (I would even call Mayakovsky a rapper of his generation).